Talking mostly about that running after leftovers to give them "shoot of mercy" after fights which you had already won, or (definatelly worst part of movie for me) running literally 2 minutes behind that group in ABG in second fraps before true pvp even started. Next time just cut it please.
Another suggestion from me is speeding up the parts when you kite behind corners (mostly loa and i believe in future toi as well)... when in that part of video in 30 seconds literally only thing which happen is jsut Tyriastenne (i realyl dont know why but w/e )over-extend behind corner and is killed it starts to be not entertaining.
Last hint is about that solo pvp vs AN. First of all really gz for killing 5 ppl at once but it looked liek it was just supports with huge lvl disadvantage. I would add this clip to the end of video (or better to the end of your another solo pvp video which i belive wil lcome soon as well) with some funny music background as a "cherry on top of the cake"... it wasnt really challenging pvp (and i believe you know it as well) but still valuable fraps.
I hope i was specific enough.